literature

Glue is Temporary

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"You broke my heart" I tell you.
And it was true. you shattered it into a million pieces.
"What if I glued it back together?" You whisper. I look in to your eyes, what I thought were cold, icy blues eyes, were really soft, trustworthy blue eyes.

So I trusted you. I believed you were telling the truth

What a fool I was

I figured out your plan. It took a while, but I did

Sadly, it was too late.

I ended in tears, trying to forget what we said before all of this started

"You broke my heart" I think, and remember he just did it again

"What if I glued it back together?" Echoes in my head

The glue you used only holds temporarily. You used flimsy, unstable glue. I am looking for someone who can take all the shattered pieces, place them back together, and use cement...
I don't know if anyone has done this before, I just thought of it though. It's been a while since I've done a literature piece, so please leave a critic. I really want to know how I did, and what I can improve on.
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Sonic-Dashie's avatar
OMG..... i love it. its so deep. It tells a story in a short paragraph. I LOVE IT!!!